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r-y-r
May 10, 2004, 5:49 p.m.


r-y-r

***Automatic -10 (No link)***

Contact: 5/5

notes, e-mail, guestbook... perfect!

Errors: 5/5

None!

Navigation: 15/15

Very simple... I like the X's... it adds a creative touch to the navigation

Updates: 3/5

All of your updates are very spaced... try to update constantly.

Layout/Design: 20/20

I love your layout. The colors are more neutral and go well together.

Content: 40/40

Your entries are very well thought out and are lengthy. Also when using dialogue, you make them into separate paragraphs for future reference.

Bonus: 1/5

The Diarist... you should have more extras to keep your readers occupied.

Would Reviewer Return: 3/5

Maybe... once changes have been made.

Total: 82/100

Overall Comments:

All you need to do is add more extras and update more. Other than that, you have a great diary.

Reviewed by: Rachel


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